Transition Sheffield - Discussion Forum

I've had a bash at creating a general information for Transition Sheffield - see https://wiki.transitionsheffield.org.uk/Leaflets as there'd been a request for some.
Thanks to Joan for help with this.

The aim is to make something straightforwards - both in terms of people wanting to pick it up and read it, and also for any of us to be able to edit it.

So does this capture what we aim to do, say it in words that anyone would get, and appeal to a variety of people?
All comments welcome - in terms of wording, images, look and feel, whatever.

Susannah

Had a look at the colour one. It looks good Susannah. Nice and visual with not too much text. The only thing I didn't like was the style of the thought bubble which seemed in a different style to the rest of it. It seemed cartoonish whereas the rest wasn't.

The picture of the Stop Bank Greed is interesting though it makes Transition look a bit like a campaign though which is possibly a bit misleading. Aside from that it's a nice clear leaflet.